Thanks for the constructive feedback, guys. Draft #2 is well underway. As well as cleaning up the text, including some more illustrations, and adding a bit of new material, I will be incorporating some of your suggestions. I'll also be sure to mention you in the acknowledgements (which I'll add to the final draft).
@Ukated, my original draft included a chart with notable NH members and the resorts/assets that they contributed- I took it out because it was kind of repetitive (grain appearing as a resource for nearly all the members). I'm putting it back into the second draft, as well as a section on membership requirements.
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