I think the magazine is a good "first try". I rarely like "gaming fiction" but that's a personal matter
I like the small, generic cache but the Trade Kit seems unnecessary. If you're removing the gold coins, you should also remove junk like the combs. There will be plenty of combs and brushes after the Apocalypse.
The "Peppercorn Incident" is not a scenario that I would run without rewriting. In my experience, players always dislike the hypercompetent NPCs - and peppercorns can be grown in a greenhouse. Of course, this does introduce interesting possibilities. Perhaps, somewhere, someone is operating a large-scale Market Garden?
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