View Full Version : My attempt

04-11-2010, 06:58 PM
Here's my attempt, LMK what you think. I kind of picked it up in the middle of the story. I was having trouble with how to start it. Basic story is they were on a resupply/replacement convoy heading to the 5th ID when they were ambushed.

Also, let me know if ya'll like it enough for me to keep going.