Story posted
 

I just posted part of a story in the Creative Writing section of the forum. Take a look, let me know if it works and what ya'll think.

But be gentle, it's my first time putting a writing project in public.

Just read the story. I enjoyed it and as a first try I'm really impressed. Keep up the good work.

PS.

I'll PM a detailed feedback.

Given weswood's courage at putting up a story, I've decided to put up a rough draft of a story of my own, please note it's long at 60+ pages and not very good, i do hope it's of some interest to some people out there and it's about time I contributed something to the site after taking so much from it.

We have a Creative Writing section? I'll have to pay more attention!

What other sections do we have that I haven't noticed?

I finished the chapter and fleshed out wher it was needed.

Mark gave me some good advice, hopefully ya'll will like it.

Here, Paul, just for you: http://forum.juhlin.com/showthread.p...1249#post21249

That's some good changes. It's tighter and more focused on the people and teh action. The description's excellent too. I like it a lot and look forward to more.