Just read the story. I enjoyed it and as a first try I'm really impressed. Keep up the good work.
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I'll PM a detailed feedback.
Given weswood's courage at putting up a story, I've decided to put up a rough draft of a story of my own, please note it's long at 60+ pages and not very good, i do hope it's of some interest to some people out there and it's about time I contributed something to the site after taking so much from it.
Last edited by simonmark6; 04-12-2010 at 06:55 AM.
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