Pretty good although the initial Chinese attack into the USSR seems a bit weak and could do with some attention. Perhaps indicating the General's officers were of a similar mind, as were other Generals. Perhaps the other Generals promised to support the attack, but the moment they saw the Soviet response conveniently "forgot" to mobilise their own forces...
Also, wouldn't there have been some effort made by the Chinese to declare the General as a loose cannon and attempt to stop the war by diplomatic means?
Sort those issues out and I think it will all hang together fairly well.
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Last edited by Legbreaker; 05-20-2012 at 08:28 AM.
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