Looks good Rae - nice job.
My only suggestion would be to maybe add a couple of NPC's - maybe Rada member(s) working to their own agenda, a merchant in charge of a trade caravan, somone who can act as a patron type npc, that sort of thing.
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Last edited by Rainbow Six; 07-07-2015 at 04:03 PM.
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