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Old 08-22-2016, 04:20 PM
JHart JHart is offline
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Worth reading again. Minor nitpick:

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8 In this action Warrant Officer Juliet Tilley became the first female Medal of Honour winner for twice landing her OH58 helicopter behind Pact lines under fire to rescue downed AH1 crews. In the second incident she dismounted to help a wounded pilot from the wreckage of his helicopter.
The Medal of Honor is awarded, not won.

Suggested rewording:
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In this action, WO2 Juliet Tilley became the first woman to be awarded the Medal of Honor. She twice landed her OH58 helicopter behind Pact lines under fire to rescue downed AH1 crews. In the second incident she dismounted to help a wounded pilot from the wreckage of his helicopter.
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