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Author's Note

As I re-read this first relatively complete draft of the Battle of Southern Arizona, I can see things that looked good in the notes and sketches but which don't work. I'm going to remove capturing damaged vehicles during the fight with Ensenada Brigade in Yuma--it just doesn't play out. I'm going to have to name people and organizations earlier, I think. There are some other changes I'll make next time around, too. I need to give more consideration to aircraft. Though I doubt I'll include any fighter-bomber missions by either side (AZ is a secondary front, after all), light observation aircraft might not be out of place.

The bad news is that you gentlemen must endure a rough-hewn product. The good news is that constructive feedback is particularly welcome at this stage. Observations about tactics, organizations, and conflicts with canon have a good chance of being incorporated into the next draft.

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