Continuation in Post apoc creative writing

[Brother in Arms]

Hey everyone I decided to continue the post apocolyptic creative writing story Alone that Bighauser started. It was ment to be a story in the round and I wondered if anyone was reading it at the moment. Feel free to add to it if not I will just continue to add to it. I am a little worried that I am too detail oriented and that it is began to lag a bit at the soldier rests in the village with the two Polish women he met in the forest. If you are bored read what there is so far and let me know what you think

Brother in Arms