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Old 11-02-2009, 07:04 PM
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Not a bad draft. Could do with some polishing but still a damn good read.

He definately appears to have been setting himself up as a king as early as the immediate aftermath of the nukes. Seems a little strange that higher command didn't notice and jump on him, but I suppose they were just a little occupied with what was arguably more important issues elsewhere...
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Old 11-02-2009, 11:29 PM
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Could do with some polishing...
It's true. Sadly, between the new boy, the better half, the house, the rabbits, and algebra and chemistry, rough drafts are about all I have time for. Also, I've been told that I have to exercise more to prevent PTSD-related outbursts or give up whiskey. Bought myself and the boy a running stroller this weekend... Additionally, I've noticed that much of my work on Thunder Empire has evolved over the course of time. Once I can settle on a complete volume of material, I'll go back and make that sucker shine.

I'm hoping that most of the other questions will be answered in the next installment.

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Old 11-03-2009, 01:10 AM
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Also, I've been told that I have to exercise more to prevent PTSD-related outbursts or give up whiskey.
No contest. Exercise more, keep drinking whiskey
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