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Not a bad draft. Could do with some polishing but still a damn good read.
He definately appears to have been setting himself up as a king as early as the immediate aftermath of the nukes. Seems a little strange that higher command didn't notice and jump on him, but I suppose they were just a little occupied with what was arguably more important issues elsewhere...
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It's true. Sadly, between the new boy, the better half, the house, the rabbits, and algebra and chemistry, rough drafts are about all I have time for. Also, I've been told that I have to exercise more to prevent PTSD-related outbursts or give up whiskey. Bought myself and the boy a running stroller this weekend... Additionally, I've noticed that much of my work on Thunder Empire has evolved over the course of time. Once I can settle on a complete volume of material, I'll go back and make that sucker shine.
I'm hoping that most of the other questions will be answered in the next installment. Webstral Last edited by Webstral; 11-02-2009 at 11:32 PM. Reason: Additional Material |
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