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11-02-2009, 07:04 PM
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Not a bad draft. Could do with some polishing but still a damn good read.
He definately appears to have been setting himself up as a king as early as the immediate aftermath of the nukes. Seems a little strange that higher command didn't notice and jump on him, but I suppose they were just a little occupied with what was arguably more important issues elsewhere...
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