A Pro's Review of 2013

[Tegyrius]

Originally Posted by AcesandEights

Yes, some minor editing foibles caught my eye, but I see them all too often these days in large manuscripts pumped out by big name publishing houses, so I'm somewhat forgiving in that respect. I did want to circle them and give out a list later for correction, but I stopped myself

You're more forgiving than I am. I've been known to throw things across the room when I find editing errors in my own published work.

I was however left with the impression that the rules needed to be, perhaps, clarified a bit, maybe even include a better combat overview, but this would be in addition to the already existing content and not in place of it. I would love to see a one page flow chart for the combat system, as it would be played out, including bullet points for when some of the option rules come in to play. Maybe do one of these one page summaries for players and one specifically for the GM/storyteller etc.

Have you seen Overdrive's combat summary sheet over at the 93GS forum? It is made of pure awesome distilled into PDF form.

- C.