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04-11-2010, 07:00 PM
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Story posted
I just posted part of a story in the Creative Writing section of the forum. Take a look, let me know if it works and what ya'll think.
But be gentle, it's my first time putting a writing project in public.
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04-12-2010, 06:00 AM
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Just read the story. I enjoyed it and as a first try I'm really impressed. Keep up the good work.
PS. I'll PM a detailed feedback. Given weswood's courage at putting up a story, I've decided to put up a rough draft of a story of my own, please note it's long at 60+ pages and not very good, i do hope it's of some interest to some people out there and it's about time I contributed something to the site after taking so much from it. Last edited by simonmark6; 04-12-2010 at 06:55 AM.
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04-12-2010, 03:17 PM
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We have a Creative Writing section? I'll have to pay more attention!
What other sections do we have that I haven't noticed?
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04-12-2010, 09:19 PM
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I finished the chapter and fleshed out wher it was needed.
Mark gave me some good advice, hopefully ya'll will like it. Here, Paul, just for you: http://forum.juhlin.com/showthread.p...1249#post21249
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04-13-2010, 02:44 AM
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That's some good changes. It's tighter and more focused on the people and teh action. The description's excellent too. I like it a lot and look forward to more.
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